brainstorming for "talked with by fire" title page

It has taken a lot longer to get this out to you than I had previously anticipated, but today I present you with the proposed title page image for To Some I Have Talked with by the Fire. The first initial I drafted up back in November was centered around a flock of birds(presumably they will be ravens, but at the moment they are a nice generic animal of the avian variety.) That initial turned out so well that it was decided to carry that theme over into the title page. This title page breaks the continuity of figure centered imagery which has been used for all the other poems to date. However, between the up sweeping flames, the rising bird, and the smoke swirls, I feel that the visual plane is being used roughly in the same manner of that in previous images. Therefore, I do not believe that the lack of a human figure in this image will be a problem.

Elements:
fire and raven - And of the embattled flaming multitude/ who rise, wing above wing, flame above flame
bats - Of passionate men, like bats in the dead trees
knife/dagger/etc - and with the clashing of their sword-blades make/ a rapturous music, will the morning break

As you can see in the image above I am playing with the idea of writing the poem's title in the smoke, however, I'm not certain how this will work. Unless I can find a way to work the titles into all the title page images themselves, then I will not be doing that.

My apologies that this is so short, but there will be more to come next Monday or later in the weekend.

brainstorming and analyzation for "elemental powers" title page

Greetings all! I am thrilled to death with what I have to post today. Drafted up over a chicken sandwich at chili's, the end sketch/idea is nigh perfect. The Poet Pleads with the Elemental Powers has always been an interesting problem for me because there are so many elements that are obviously important but I've had no idea how to include them all and yet make anything feel cohesive. Last November I drafted up a first intial for this piece that represented the polar dragon mentioned and my notations from that same day focused on pulling out all the seemingly important poetic elements. Today something just seemed to click and below is what resulted which (I repeat) I'm very happy with. Instead of explaining it all here like usual, I'll explain in between images. Here we go.

Complete Image:

Like I discussed last week, it was pretty clear off the bat that the title page needed to feature a human figure. The purpose of said woman in this particular title page is three fold. 1- She is the embodiment of her whoever her may be (encircle her, love and sing her into peace; whither her footseptes go) 2- She is representative of rose/Immortal Rose. Rose appears in many of Yeats' poems, and more often than not rose is a stand in for the woman Yeats was madly in love with. Notice the actual rose drawn in this woman's hair. 3- She is the embodiment of the elemental powers/ The Powers. The Powers are clearly important to the poem since they are mentiong repeatedly, and find thier way into the poem's title. For the life of me though, I could not think of a way to picture them. An ethereal type woman is always a good path to go when representing mythical figures so that is that path I chose - that of least resistance. To emphasize the elemental part of it, notice the four part wheel that floats between her hands. There is a close up of this below, but this is essentially a wheel that holds the four elements - earth, air, fire & water. I will discuss the sun and moon further down.
The Elemental Wheel/ Sun/ Moon:

See individual images for details

The Elemental Wheel:

This wheel floats between the woman's hands (see top picture) and portrays said elements in the manner that they appear Elemental Powers. 1- water = waves (Great Powers of falling wave; Like the pale cup of sea) 2- fire = flames (unfold your flaming wings; falling wave and wind and windy fire) 3- wind = gusts of wind (windy fire; when winds have gathered) 4- earth = brown darkness with flecks of gold (uncoiled from glimmering deep to deep). The earth bit is perhaps a bit of a stretch, but all the other elements were so clearly present in the poem that I knew earth had to be there somewhere as well. Since it is not uncommon for places below the earth to be poetically referred to as the deep that is what I went with.

The Moon and Sun:

Hello alchemical imagery, how you have been missed! This poem says both the nets of day and night and when winds have gathered and sun and moon burned dim. The sun and moon can clearly be seen as merely a literal portrayal of night and day. However, we both know that Yeats was very fond of slipping alchemical references into his work, and nothing is so glaringly iconographicaly alchemical as these two (explained in a second). Also, from a practical perspective, Yeats mentioned sun and moon turned dim. Does that mean that they were both fading out? In life the sun fades out and is replaced by the moon, likewise the moon gives way to the sun. Not even during a eclipse are both completely gone. this logic leads me to belive that f so than Yeats could not have literally meant sun and moon to mean "sun and moon". They must be standing in for something as symbols.

The Moon:

In alchemy, the moon (also Luna and Diana) is the female aspect of the opus (the continual distillation process necessary to create the Philosopher's Stone). Essentially it is silver (literal or philosophical). It gets complicated, but for the purpose of simplicity, consider Luna to be the name of an elixir that was used to transmute a base metal into pure silver. Pure silver is considered to be only slightly more impure than gold. By combining this silver with pure gold in something called a chemical wedding it helped form the active component essential to creating the Philosopher's Stone. As you would remember if I had posted notes about this (I swear I did but I can't find it now) the Philosopher's Stone was not only a literal object that was able to turn base metals into gold. It was believed that the Stone had the power to make all imperfect things perfect, and would turn a normal man into an extremely illumined philosopher. It symbolized a light brought into darkness and embodied the merger of divine love & divine wisdom. Due to the symbollic weight placd on the Stone it has to be of some bearing here. I'm not quite sure yet how that plays into this poem, but I promise I'm working on it. As for the position of the moon, I visually prefer the waning crescent because its opening faces the female figure. Since the root of this image is iconography/symbolism though, I need to find out what connotations (preferably of Celtic origin) are tied to the waxing and waning moon. More on this eventually as well.

The Sun:

Just as the moon (Luna/Diana) was the female aspect of the chemical wedding, the sun (Sol) is the wedding's male aspect. The sun is representative of gold as prepared via the art of alchemy. There was no other element equal to the sun's inherent symbolism, which philosophically represented divine light. Alchemist Jean de la Fontaine wrote Gold is the sun; to make gold, is to become God. The Philosopher's Stone (see The Moon) was born through the marriage of Sol and Luna. Visually the presence of both Sol and Luna together would then probably suggest the possibility of perfection, philosophical illumination, etc without its actual achievement. Again I need to think about this, but that is off the top of my head. Along this vein though, you will note that I have placed the sun and moon on opposite sides of the central figure. The possibility of their merging exists, but her presence prevents this from happening.

You will notice seven circles nestled within the rays of the sun. These represent the Seven Lights (and though the Seven Lights bowed in their dance and wept). I'm not certain why Lights is capitalized, but there must be a reason to turn it into a proper noun. The number seven holds spiritual connotations as well as magical ones, but I am not well versed enough in this to comment at the moment. We know that Yeats was an active member of the Order of the Golden Dawn so I'd say that some magical connotation is very very likely. Why that makes Lights a proper noun though still remains a personal mystery.

Whew! This ended up being far longer than I had anticipated. It certainly looks like I have my research work cut out for me, but yay for the image! This is the most excited I've been in days so the pending research seems more like an exciting adventure into unknown lands, as opposed to a chore or other undesirable activity. I look forward to seeing you all next week. Who knows what lies in store for then.

brainstorming for "hosts of the air" title page

Greetings folks! I haven't picked up the TTP for a couple weeks so it is fantastic to actually have some imagery to share yet again. A good hour + was passed at the pizza parlor early this afternoon. It's amazing how much can get done when forced to leave the house. Add a table made for four (seating just lil' ole' me) to spread papers out on, an endless supply of diet coke, and a pizza buffet of cheesy bread sticks; presto -instant inspiration! Today I tackled the poetic conundrum that is The Host of the Air.

The funny thing about Host of the Air is that it was brought into TTP late in the game as a replacement for Rose of the World. Drawn in by Air's beauty, I felt that surely this was a sensible replacement. Mythological symbolism, possible alchemical symbolism, religious symbolism, people who were other that what they seam- this piece has it all! Funnily enough, this has also been one of the most frustrating poems to brainstorm until today. Perhaps it was the cinnamon sticks or perhaps it was the cheesy bread, but inspiration hit today and it consisted on one key idea ... keep it simple. Host of the Air has so many exciting ideas that, like usual, I wanted to do all of it and ended up finding that this overload was causing me to do nothing at all. Therefore for the title page I focused a few key elements:

1) Brigid the goddess/saint was the woman Yeats refers to as bride and is the subject of this poem.

2) Yeats constantly refers to Bride's dim long hair

3) Brigid the goddess was a goddess of fire (I found this in further reading and will discuss it in some detail later this weekend.)

4) The most recognizable symbol of Brigid the saint is Brigid's Cross. (pictured at end of post)

I then combined all of these into one image that will be sketched on Host of the Air's title page. I have not figured out the placement of the title itself yet, but that will come later. For now here is brainstorm #1 for Air's title page. Along other lines, this was a major breakthrough, because at the moment there is only one other title page sketch - which incidentally is also of a woman. With two of the six transcribed poems being represented by human figures, there clearly is a trend that must continue through the rest of the pieces for continuity sake. We shall see how that works out. For now, enjoy the first Host of the Air title page brainstorm with details. It is clear that there is cleaning up/refiguring that needs doing, but for now I'm thrilled to have this much.

brainstorming for "the song of wandering aengus" first initial and title page

These drawings were made pre-Yeats/alchemy "discovery." The initial is another version of a previous brainstorm. For comparison's sake I have posted the brainstorm #1 for the initial first. It was drawn a little over a month ago, and you can tell that the idea has been developed some but not much. I want to keep the fish and the berry but everything else keeps changing on me and the whole concept simply needs to mature more than anything. I love the title page brainstorm sketch and think I will use something very similar on the final product.