brainstorming for "the song of wandering aengus" first initial and title page

These drawings were made pre-Yeats/alchemy "discovery." The initial is another version of a previous brainstorm. For comparison's sake I have posted the brainstorm #1 for the initial first. It was drawn a little over a month ago, and you can tell that the idea has been developed some but not much. I want to keep the fish and the berry but everything else keeps changing on me and the whole concept simply needs to mature more than anything. I love the title page brainstorm sketch and think I will use something very similar on the final product.